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31 May 2006 @ 06:00 am
SILENCE AND TEARS, Chapter 20, Justin's POV  
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Viv: BJ kissvivrbn on June 1st, 2006 04:17 am (UTC)
I sit up and stare at him, switching on the lamp so I can see his face. “Homo says what?”

“Homo says he’s moving.”

hee, I don't know what it is exactly, but this tickles the heck out of me. Maybe it's partly my visuals of their expressions and body language. Gale and Randy had such great expressions.

They seem to be making the long distance relationship work out, so far. Good to see.

I love hearing the conversations between these two. Toss-up of favorite between those and the lovin'
rand_altrand_alt on June 1st, 2006 08:52 am (UTC)
let's have both!
(no subject) - vivrbn on June 1st, 2006 01:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Zoe: cigarstraberrikyss on June 2nd, 2006 05:11 am (UTC)
at first i freaked out when I saw the six months. buts its all good. im so happy that Brian came to the show for Justin, i love him. And damn, I wish I could see Justin's painting. and brian is moving up lofts?! how exciting, now Gus will be able to stay there. Ohh, very good chapter! o and i loved this line of course, "I’d love to smoke pussy and talk about cigars with them over steaks,"
rand_altrand_alt on June 4th, 2006 10:06 am (UTC)
bwahahaaa great icon!!!
(Anonymous) on June 2nd, 2006 12:56 pm (UTC)
This is a beautiful journey you're taking us on and the bracelet icon is just pefect. Julia
rand_altrand_alt on June 4th, 2006 10:07 am (UTC)
heather did the icon. thanks
film102film102 on June 3rd, 2006 02:34 am (UTC)
Just lovely
it's all I can say.

Just lovely.

rand_altrand_alt on June 4th, 2006 10:07 am (UTC)
Re: Just lovely
thanks lyn
claudj28claudj28 on June 3rd, 2006 03:34 pm (UTC)
Hey... Coming back from vacation to 4 new entries was reaaaallllyyyyy nice!!! This feels like a new beginning, with Justin being in NY and doing so well. To be honest, it seems (too ?) perfect because everything is okay with them; with Gus; Brian's health, and B (and J) moving into a bigger place... It's like resolution to the 'old' stuff, and I hope you're just preparing for the next chapter in their life?!!!

Anyway... My absolute favorite part in this is "Yeah, I did." Because this showed more than anything else that everything really has changed. I enjoyed your description of the exhibition. I'm so glad Justin is able to do what he loves so passionately (beside Brian of course!). Still, you made it clear how important Brian is to Justin, and that he acknowledges his part in this success.

You mentioning the cancer was the difficult part for me because I recently lost a family member to cancer (and going to a funeral at the day you're leaving for vacation really sucks! Not that it normally wouldn't but... you know?!). But I'm glad that Brian is okay.

I like that Brian isn't moving out the loft, well, not far away. And I liked that Justin stood up and suggested that it would be his decision as well. Another step. I really, really love the loft, but it was always Brians. Maybe with the new one it will feel more 'theirs'. And Gus... I adored their conversation about that very much.

So... After reading 4 in a row... where's the next post?! ;-)
rand_altrand_alt on June 4th, 2006 10:09 am (UTC)
Soon, i promise, soon. sorry about the death in your family, but did you get to go on vacation after all?
(no subject) - claudj28 on June 5th, 2006 05:58 pm (UTC) (Expand)
film102film102 on June 6th, 2006 05:19 am (UTC)
Just reread this chapter
after the first evening of my first drawing class. I've done everything else with books and Queer as Folk and rec centers.

It's so lovely it's almost easy to forget what all transpired before this evening. Poignant, "You didn't have to..."

"Yes, I did."

I can hear and see it.

I keep remembering that in two days from now last summer, I totalled my brand new car of 3 months while attending my first acting class.

Such a different time.

rand_altrand_alt on June 6th, 2006 08:50 am (UTC)
Re: Just reread this chapter
I hope this is a happier summer lyn!!!
ONE'S NOT SUCH A LOW NUMBER.: ♥ the neck loveamelialourdes on June 6th, 2006 08:09 am (UTC)
long time reader ...
... but this is the first time that I've actually commented on anything written in your journal. My best friend and I used to discuss your stories at great lengths and will forever be crushed that The Quiet Men will never be completed. I will never listen to Crystal Method the same way ever again without thinking of the faerie land.

That aside -- I'm only now catching up on this story though I've had it bookmarked since you first began writing it. Your reasons for writing it are on par with my feelings for S5 and I couldn't be more grateful for this after the series ended.

I think that every chapter was written beautifully, very IC for Brian and Justin and it's really touched me in a way that I can't really figure out myself now. I'm just glad that I'm actually happy reading through their angst and their compromises.

Reading this chapter and seeing that it began with "six months later" set my brain panicking as if this story is over when I feel like it's just begun but thankfully (hopefully) another chapter will be on the way. They're finally learning and I really can't wait to see what they discover together.

Thank you Ran!
rand_altrand_alt on June 6th, 2006 08:52 am (UTC)
Re: long time reader ...
There will be more on the way. thanks for being a loyal reader for so long and for finally coming out and telling me. Of course I have no way of knowing who really reads my writing, so it means a lot to me to hear someone "new" say I'm here and I've been here and I'm having a good time. Thanks
cindybabycindybaby on June 8th, 2006 02:15 am (UTC)
Okay, first I need to say...how the HELL did I miss this?

Secondly, it's absolutely WONDERFUL!!!!!

Every word, I'm either on the verge of crying, screaming, panting, smiling or crying again, but in a good way.

I LOVE it and can't wait for more.

Thank you!!! I'm so glad you decided to put your own spin on everything.